I am a student at Ōtaki College in Ōtaki, NZ. My blog is a place where I will be able to share some of my learning. Please note....some work won't be edited - they are just my first drafts, so there may be some errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas on my posts.
Hello Liam nice to know you are still hanging with Jamieson and i like your paper airplane maybe you could add audio next time. and i saw the plane go through the seat that was cool.
Thank you for your positive, thoughtful, helpful comments. Positive - something I have done well. Thoughtful - a sentence or more that lets me know you that you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. Helpful - please give me some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about.
Hi Liam, I like you paper plane. It went really far. How long did it take you to make
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DeleteOk so the comment that came to you was me sorry i forgot to put my name down.
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