Wednesday, 14 October 2020

Dangerous Games story



 This is my Dangerous games story that i wrote a while ago. it is called Deadly planets. 


2 comments:

  1. Kia Ora its Marama😁

    I like how you put the title of your work in it unlike everyone else

    Why did this thing take so long

    Maybe put in more info

    Hope you take my advice From Marama

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  2. hahaha thats funny!

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