This is my Dangerous games story that i wrote a while ago. it is called Deadly planets.
I am a student at Ōtaki College in Ōtaki, NZ. My blog is a place where I will be able to share some of my learning. Please note....some work won't be edited - they are just my first drafts, so there may be some errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas on my posts.
Wednesday, 14 October 2020
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Thank you for your positive, thoughtful, helpful comments.
Positive - something I have done well.
Thoughtful - a sentence or more that lets me know you that you read/watched or listened to what I had to say.
Helpful - please give me some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about.
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Kia Ora its Marama😁
ReplyDeleteI like how you put the title of your work in it unlike everyone else
Why did this thing take so long
Maybe put in more info
Hope you take my advice From Marama
hahaha thats funny!
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